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I like how the article writer had many dates and a little bit of everything in it!! I like when there are dates because you can know in what kind of time they were in like if they were in the year of the war or the twin towers crashed!! Also I liked it because it talked about his whole life instead of just one part of it.

Hey Gaby I loved your Obama Article it is so good!!!!!!! You also have alot of good details on what obama has said!!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sincerly your best friend, Bora Marvelous teachers who l♥ve us all, Every day is a new discovery, Memories never end, Open hearts are soon filled with l♥ve, roudy children, Roudy children fill the large rooms, Icecream is over at the snack bar, All the kids are always nice, Loops and turns in the year, but it always ends great!!